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Interesting ideas. Characters not fully developed or believable. Interesting to see how Ms. McKillip writing evolves from this to the Riddle Master series which is so beautiful.

An exquisite gem of classic fantasy. Beautifully written.
emotional hopeful inspiring reflective medium-paced
Plot or Character Driven: A mix
Strong character development: Yes
Loveable characters: Yes
Diverse cast of characters: No
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes

4 stars, Metaphorosis reviews

Sybel, the third in a series of mages living alone atop Eld Mountain, and caring for the legendary creatures they have summoned, finds her life disturbed by a man with a child. Reluctant at first to take it from him, she finds that both man and child change her life beyond anything she expected.

I first read this a very long time ago, and didn't care for it. I wasn't then the ardent fan of McKillip I later became, and I found the story slow and unfocused. Reading the story decades later, through older, wiser eyes, I concur with both those early judgments, but see beyond them to the beautiful prose that McKillip almost always brings along.

The story isn't really about the forgotten beasts. They're an interesting backdrop, but more decorative than crucial. And their captivity - peaceably enslaved by the mages, seemingly just for the sake of collection - gets very little attention. Instead, the story's about Sybel and the disruption caused to her life. Here, the story is recognizably McKillip - the language is lush and dreamy, the characters unsure but interesting. The emotions in the book are less well balanced than in McKillip's later books. That has its benefits - the story veers toward a darker side than we usually see - but also left me often with a feeling that the story was slightly off-kilter, and would have benefited from the author's later experience with storytelling.

There's also a somewhat disturbing disregard for secondary characters, whom the protagonists assign fates without a second thought. It's a hero-centric approach that later books largely avoided.
There's also a somewhat disturbing disregard for secondary characters, whom the protagonists assign fates without a second thought. It's a hero-centric approach that later books largely avoided. On the other hand, there are tantalizing references to riddles, and a Riddlemaster...

While not the best of McKillip's books, it's far better than my faded memory of it. Just approaching my teens, I suppose I was simply too young to appreciate McKillip's fabulous prose, which even in this early book is well in evidence. It's a beautifully written, if flawed, book in a long series of beautiful novels by McKillip.
adventurous mysterious reflective relaxing
Plot or Character Driven: Character
Strong character development: Yes
Loveable characters: Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes

Such a pretty book. Vague on details in a way that makes everything surreal as I read - like I can never quite put faces to the characters, but it doesn't really matter, because you see their full selves instead. I would like to come back to this book and read it more slowly, more intentionally.

I am pretty sure I read this book when I was a younger man, but I was not mature enough to appreciate most of the themes in this book. A very striking book.
adventurous emotional hopeful sad tense medium-paced
Plot or Character Driven: A mix
Strong character development: Yes
Loveable characters: Yes
Diverse cast of characters: N/A
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes
adventurous dark mysterious reflective slow-paced
Plot or Character Driven: Character
Strong character development: Yes
Loveable characters: Yes
Diverse cast of characters: Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes

Gorgeous prose, and the magic and characters were so ordinary and fascinating. Thought provoking and quiet. I loved it.