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basketkaceee's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
4.0
Graphic: Addiction, Alcoholism, Chronic illness, Drug abuse, Drug use, Self harm, Sexual content, and Alcohol
Moderate: Child death
Minor: Adult/minor relationship, Gun violence, Pedophilia, Rape, and Sexual assault
beeeverly's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? It's complicated
3.5
Graphic: Addiction, Alcoholism, Death, Self harm, and Blood
Moderate: Adult/minor relationship, Chronic illness, Domestic abuse, Drug use, Gun violence, Sexual content, Suicidal thoughts, Toxic relationship, Grief, Car accident, Death of parent, and Abandonment
garrettcz's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? Character
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? It's complicated
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
4.0
Graphic: Addiction, Alcoholism, Bullying, Chronic illness, Cursing, Domestic abuse, Drug abuse, Drug use, Emotional abuse, Gun violence, Mental illness, Panic attacks/disorders, Self harm, Sexual content, Toxic relationship, Grief, Car accident, Alcohol, and Pandemic/Epidemic
Moderate: Addiction, Adult/minor relationship, Alcoholism, Child abuse, Death, Gun violence, Infidelity, Mental illness, Violence, Medical content, Grief, Medical trauma, Gaslighting, Abandonment, Alcohol, and Injury/Injury detail
booksinkandpaper2's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? Character
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
4.0
Graphic: Addiction, Alcoholism, Child abuse, Chronic illness, Drug use, Self harm, Sexual content, and Abandonment
Moderate: Adult/minor relationship, Death, Sexual assault, and Grief
page1995's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? Character
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
Graphic: Addiction, Adult/minor relationship, Alcoholism, Chronic illness, Drug abuse, Death of parent, and Classism
rickireadss's review against another edition
3.0
⚠️: self harm, drug abuse, alcoholism, drug use, addiction, chronic illness, suicidal thoughts, mental illness, suicidal attempt, abandonment, gun violence, death, grief, injury/injury detail, child abuse, child death, violence, sexual assault, toxic relationship, blood, sexual harassment, emotional abuse, racism, medical content, car accident, medical trauma, death of parent, domestic abuse, physical abuse, bullying, panic attacks/disorders, murder, forced institutionalization, pedophilia, vomit, ableism, sexism, adult/minor relationship
Graphic: Addiction, Alcoholism, Child abuse, Child death, Chronic illness, Death, Drug abuse, Drug use, Emotional abuse, Gun violence, Mental illness, Self harm, Sexual assault, Suicidal thoughts, Toxic relationship, Blood, Grief, Suicide attempt, Abandonment, Sexual harassment, and Injury/Injury detail
Moderate: Ableism, Adult/minor relationship, Bullying, Domestic abuse, Panic attacks/disorders, Pedophilia, Physical abuse, Racism, Forced institutionalization, Vomit, Medical content, Medical trauma, Car accident, Death of parent, and Murder
taylorsevalia's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? Character
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
4.0
Graphic: Drug abuse, Drug use, Self harm, Medical content, Suicide attempt, and Abandonment
Moderate: Sexual content, Violence, and Blood
Minor: Adult/minor relationship, Alcoholism, Child death, Toxic relationship, Vomit, Car accident, Death of parent, Murder, and Toxic friendship
_inge's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? Character
That being said, their love not being perfect did mean I found the plot itself a bit confusing. Their past romance was a very intensive week together. It’s stated that their connection throughout this was imminent and perfect, so it was definitely believable it had such an impact, but it could’ve easily been perceived as a quick summer fling. I was so wrapped up in these characters that I didn’t really think about it as I was reading though! There’s some miscommunication at the end which could’ve clearly been avoided if people just… stayed in touch, and from the last few chapters the narrative structure really does feel like any other romance book. It felt really original and interesting at times, but still felt into romance tropes anyways. This meant I wasn’t sure if this book would put itself against other romances or if it was meant to be a criticism on them.
The writing style was infused with (black) pop culture references and brands, which got annoying quickly. People would wear Dior dresses which make them look like someone from a music video by Rihanna, people wouldn’t simply pick up their phone but their Samsung Galaxy…. I just opened this book at a random page to find examples, and I already got ‘Serena Williams fused with Wonder-Woman’ and ‘Morgan Freeman in that specific film’. It seems there’s got to be a reference to something on every single page.
Audre especially uses terminology and modern ideas about topics like race and gender in a way that felt jarring sometimes. There’s a segment where Audre sits with kids who she thinks are all ‘mentally ill’, because she thinks they’ve got disorders like OCD and ASD, and then wonders what’ll happen to these ‘psychos’ when they grow up ??? I never understood the purpose of these segments; they address actual issues, but the tone makes it seem like these segments are meant to be funny.
There’s also a lot of time shifts as well as perspective shifts, but they’re not clearly marked in any way and don’t happen within a set pattern. At certain times I was therefore unsure whether I was reading about a past event or not. When Eva calls her mum at one point I was certain this was a past event, until she discusses things which happened in the present.
A lot of these ‘issues’ I’m only considering in hindsight. I really wanted to keep reading this and didn’t want to put it down. The ending wasn’t fulfilling to me in any way, which is maybe why I’m considering other aspects of this novel now too. But I was hooked on this for a while, and for the most part I do think it did something interesting within the romance genre.
Graphic: Addiction, Adult/minor relationship, Alcoholism, Child death, Drug use, Gun violence, Racial slurs, Self harm, Sexual assault, Sexual content, and Alcohol
toofondofbooks_'s review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? Character
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
5.0
Graphic: Ableism, Alcoholism, Child death, Chronic illness, Death, Drug use, Pedophilia, Racism, Rape, Sexual assault, Sexual content, Suicidal thoughts, Suicide, Violence, Vomit, Medical content, Car accident, Death of parent, Alcohol, and Sexual harassment
Moderate: Fatphobia
Minor: Adult/minor relationship, Infidelity, Slavery, Abortion, and Suicide attempt
macknificent's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? Character
- Strong character development? No
- Loveable characters? It's complicated
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
3.0
Before I get into my beef with the book, let me be clear that I was entertained by this story. It was filled with big emotions and wit, two of my favorite ingredients for a good time. I found Eva's relationship with her daughter incredibly endearing. It was very “of the moment,” what with the zeitgeist so focused on healing generational trauma. In that same healing vein, Shane's ownership of his shortcomings was refreshing; we don’t usually get a reformed bad boy visibly
doing the work.
Now that that’s out of the way, let’s get on with the gripes. Firstly, there seemed to be some Eurocentrism and possibly colorism at play. On the cover of the book, both Eva and Shane appear to have darker skin but the text describes them as having traits that would typically be associated with those of a fairer shade, i.e Eva’s loose curl pattern, Shane’s light eyes. Tia Williams is excellent with dialogue but seems to have some issues creating full and nuanced characters in this book. The majority of the adult characters felt like Black Excellence stereotypes, that was disappointing and gave the story a dated feel. The young characters weren’t much
better, especially the disadvantaged children Shane mentored. The only time we hear anything about them is when it’s useful for showing some sort of positive character trait for Shane.
My biggest issue is in making this a romance. For the romance to work, you have to be sold on Eva and Shane’s initial fling being real love so you can buy into the second chance of it all. I couldn’t.
The behavior of the characters during their original entanglement makes sense, they are teens with actions dominated by their hormones and their traumas. Stumbling upon somebody who didn’t immediately judge their coping mechanisms was a rare point of light in a dark and confusing life; it’s no surprise they squeezed every last endorphin out of it.
But this story isn’t about teenagers, not really. It is about two adults that are doing the work to heal themselves, we are told this explicitly and repeatedly. Why then are we expected to root for Shane and Eva as they fall back into their maladaptive, codependent habits? Because this is a romance and we need our HEA.
Overall the book was giving Tyler Perry Production; the experience was entertaining and filled with potential, but nobody trusted the audience to enjoy nuance so it relied on stereotypes to get a lesser message across. Had this story ended with the break up I think it could have been a much better book. After sharing so many big emotions with the characters, a bittersweet ending would have been cathartic and made more sense to the characters’ histories. Alas, that isn’t what we got.
I read this book as part of my #soblacklove2022 series on IG and Tiktok.
https://instagram.com/macknificentreads?igshid=YmMyMTA2M2Y=
Graphic: Ableism, Addiction, Alcoholism, Drug abuse, Drug use, and Self harm
Minor: Adult/minor relationship