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A review by guardtristan
Dunkles Eis by Greig Beck
3.0
I'm not going into detail, I will just list a few things that really drove me a bit mad while reading:
- repeating things to make it obvious just HOW important those details are: First a character thinks about something, then he repeats it out loud (in the next sentence) to another character.
- not sure if it's a translation error or a author mess-up but I'm pretty positive a anticoagulant won't make your situation any better when you put it on a bleeding wound (to make it stop bleeding...)
- time jumps, time jumps everywhere
- for 100 pages, the batteries in their lamps run out - I can't even remember how many hours that was supposed to cover...
- the unlogical details, the mentioning of things that didn't needed to be said out loud... I really don't want to go into detail too much but like I said, maybe it's just a translation thing...
(It still gets a 3 of 5 because I was happy to get to read ANYTHING that has to do with something not usual)
- repeating things to make it obvious just HOW important those details are: First a character thinks about something, then he repeats it out loud (in the next sentence) to another character.
- not sure if it's a translation error or a author mess-up but I'm pretty positive a anticoagulant won't make your situation any better when you put it on a bleeding wound (to make it stop bleeding...)
- time jumps, time jumps everywhere
- for 100 pages, the batteries in their lamps run out - I can't even remember how many hours that was supposed to cover...
- the unlogical details, the mentioning of things that didn't needed to be said out loud... I really don't want to go into detail too much but like I said, maybe it's just a translation thing...
(It still gets a 3 of 5 because I was happy to get to read ANYTHING that has to do with something not usual)