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A review by leilorenzo
Beauty is Looking for Beast by Toni Lynn
slow-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? Character
- Strong character development? No
- Loveable characters? No
- Diverse cast of characters? No
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
0.25
The story is loosely inspired by Beauty and the beast, but the characters are lacking development, the dialogue is forced (you don't say the other person's name at the beginning of each sentence!!), and the way they are portrayed, one has the size and the other the personality of the beast, so which is which?
There seemed to be editing missing: repetitions, mistakes and redundant information.
There was a lot of telling and no showing.
Did not like it, skimmed it. Do not recommend.
There seemed to be editing missing: repetitions, mistakes and redundant information.
There was a lot of telling and no showing.
Did not like it, skimmed it. Do not recommend.