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A review by hannahwantstoread
Mafia War by L. Steele
3.0
Probably should have been part of book two
I did enjoy this, but I don’t think it really need to be a whole book on its own. I think good editing and maybe a few less intimacy scenes would mean book 2 and 3 could be combined which would improve the flow. I wish Michael had spent more time apologising rather than skipping straight to the physical reunion, but it made sense for their relationship.
I’m beginning to feel like all the couples across these stories are following the same pattern which is getting a bit old. The couples themselves are different, but I’d like to see something other than grumpy/sunshine enemies to lovers with a third act breakup.
I did enjoy this, but I don’t think it really need to be a whole book on its own. I think good editing and maybe a few less intimacy scenes would mean book 2 and 3 could be combined which would improve the flow. I wish Michael had spent more time apologising rather than skipping straight to the physical reunion, but it made sense for their relationship.
I’m beginning to feel like all the couples across these stories are following the same pattern which is getting a bit old. The couples themselves are different, but I’d like to see something other than grumpy/sunshine enemies to lovers with a third act breakup.